2nd writing task(after peer edit)

Effects of Facebook

Facebook is a famous social interactive website and it allows you do many things in the cyber world, for example, give feedbacks to others instantly or view friends’ photos handy. You even feel very happy while communicating with your friends. Besides, you will be good at social with friends, be keen on new information and be an open mind person by using Facebook.

First, you will be good at social with friends because you can receive the inform message once your friends talk about you and then you can interact with them no matter on their “wall” or just publish a short comment. Beside the immediate communication, you can also play some interesting interactive applications with friends. The above two things can really tight your relationship between your friends

Secondly, facebook users will be keen on new information. They are used to share and receive different kind of information through facebook. The skill, be clever at new information, grows unconsciously when you click any website intriguing you. Except the fast flowing URL on friends’ facebooks, you probably train your sensitivity of things which are not existing before, for example, when you first login in facebook you can be alarm of some likeness block position by setting your profile in the unfamiliar user interface. It really helps users be keen on new information step by step.

Then the last one, you can be an open mind person by using facebook. From the above points of view, it’s obvious that facebook has a feature of sharing information quickly and much. So you can enhance yourself be a wider thinker by decoding the information from facebook, for example, the harsh comment, friends’ serious talking or life experience can all be check points of your stereo life and gains you life insight. Facebook is also able to cultivate your thinking horizon in some unconscious ways once you spend some time to mediate your lifestyle.

In conclusion, there are three advantages of using facebook: to be good at social with friend, to be keen on new information and to be an open mind person. So if you haven’t been a facebook user, go to register a new account and be a beneficial facebook user.

the mom's song

the song reallyentertains the audience
and i writed the lyrics down sentence by sentence
well, it's a little stupid, but it's really interesting.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oEFXj00Gou4

get up now get up now
get up otu of bed
wash your face
brush your teeth
comb your
skeepy head
here's your clothes
and your shoes
hear the word
i said
get up now get up and
make your bed
are you hot?
are you cold?
are you wearing that?
where's your books
and your lunch
and your homework at?
grab your coat
and your gloves
and your scarf
and hat
don't forget
you gotta feed the cat
eat your breakfast
the experts tell us
it's the most important
meal of all
take your vitamins
so you will grow up
one day to be
big and tall
please remember
the orthodontist
will be seeing you
at 3 today
don't forget your
piano lesson is this afternoon
so you must play
don't shovel
chew slowly
but hurry
the bus is here
be careful
come back here
did you wash
behind your ears?
play outside
don't be rough
would you just play fair?
be polite
make a friend
don't forget to share
work it out wait your turn
never take a dare
get along don't make me
come down there
clean your room
fold your clothes
put your stuff away
make your bed
do it now
do we have all day?
were you born in a barn?
would you like some hay?
can you even
hear a word i say?
answer the phone!
get off the phone!
don't sit so close
turn it down
no texting at the table
no more computer time tonight
your ipod's
my ipod
if you don't listen up
where are you going?
and with whom?
and what time?
do you think you're coming home?
saying thank you
please excuse me
makes you welcome
everywhere you roam
you'll appreciate my wisdom
someday when you're older
and you're grown
can't wait 'till you have
a couple little children
of your own
you'll thank me
for the counsel i gave you
so willingly
but right now
i'll thank you
not to roll
your eyes at me
close your mouth
when you chew
we'd appreciate
take a bite maybe two
of the stuff you hate
use your fork do not burp
or i'll set you straight
eat the food
i put upon your plate
get an "A" get the door
don't get smart with me
get a grip get in here
i'll count to 3
get a job get a life
get a phd
get dose of
i don't care who started it
you're grounded
until you're 36
get your story straight
and tell the truth for once
for heaven's sake
and if all your friends
jumped off a cliff
would you jump too?
if i've said it once
i've said it least
a thousand
time's before
that you're too old to
act this way
it must be
your father's DNA
look at me
when i am talking
stand up straighter
when you walk
a place
for everything
and everything
must be in place
stop crying
or i'll give you something
real to cry about
(OH!)
wash your face
brush your teeth
get your PJ's on
get in bed give a hug
say a prayer with mom
don't forget
i love you(chu)
and
tomorrow
we
will
do
this
all
again
because
a
mom's
work
never
ends
you don't need
the reason why
because, because
because, because
i said so, i said so
i said so, i said so
i'm the mom
the mom
the mom
the mom
the mom
TA-DA!

2nd writing task

Effects of Facebook

Facebook is a famous social interactive website and it allows you do many things in the cyber world, for example, give feedbacks to others instantly or view friends’ photos handy. You even feel very happy while communicating with your friends. Besides, you will be good at social with friends, be keen on new information and be an open mind person by using Facebook.

First, you will be good at social with friends because you can receive the inform message once your friends talk about you and then you can interact with them no matter on their “wall” or just publish a short comment. Beside the immediate communication, you can also play some interesting interactive applications with friends.

Secondly, facebook users will be keen on new information. They are used to share and receive different kind of information though facebook. The subconscious skill, be clever at new information, grows unconsciously when you click any website triggering you. Except the flowing URL on friends’ facebooks, you probably train your alarm of things not existing before by setting your profile in the unfamiliar user interface. It really helps users be keen on new information.

Then the last one, you can be an open mind person by using facebook. From the above points of view, it’s obvious that facebook has an information sharing feature. So you can enhance yourself be a wider thinker by decoding the information from facebook, for example, the harsh comment or friends’ serious talking all can be a check point of your stereo life and gains you life insight. Facebook is also able to cultivate your thinking horizon in some unconscious ways.

In conclusion, there are three advantages of using facebook: to be good at social with friend, to be keen on new information and to be an open mind person. So if you haven’t been a facebook user, go to register a new account and be a beneficial facebook user.

My new semester resolution(final)

My New Semester Resolution

The topic, “My new semester resolution”, is an obsolete issue for me. Although I am really reluctant to put much mind on writing the draft, I think to cultivate my major and to adjust my attitude are two important things that consist my resolution during this semester.

First, I think it’s time to cultivate and master my major much harder because I did not do much work as the assignment asked in the past times. Therefore, I felt very sorry for people who support me and I made my mind that I have to make more effort on subjects. By the way, a university student should be responsible for one’s major.

Beside the resolution on cultivating my major, I have to adjust my inner status, Attitude. I always think I am a shy and timid person due to the stage fright or lack of confidence, but I didn’t realize that I am a guy valuing others’ judgment very much and it’s a stupid thinking to do such a thing. As a result, it’s time to have some changes.

To sum up, I put cultivating my major and adjusting my attitude to a more positive way as my new semester resolution and I hope they won’t fade as former times.

the outline

Effects of Facebook

Thesis: you will be good at social with friends, be keen on new information and be an open mind person by using Facebook

Ⅰ. Introduction with thesis sentence

A. Be good at social with friends

B. Be keen on new information

C. Be an open mind person

Ⅱ. Be good at social with friends
A. You look friends’ new information on time

B. You play some interactive applications with friends

Ⅲ. Be keen on new information

A. You click the link on others’ wall

B. You set your own personal setting

Ⅳ. Be an open mind person

A. You receive much information and think about it

B. You can get much insight by reading others’ articles

Ⅴ. Conclusion (restate the thesis sentence)

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0419

I am glad that today is almost over with a fine mid-term presentation.

It must be a big leap of my attitude, accompanied with unhealthy experience.

In short, for that work I did not lie on my bed for two days night.

Therefore, I got some strange nap time, PM5-PM8.

It’s kind of stupid to brag out my time using here.

Sigh, what does this blogger mean?

I did not like write something well-constructed essay any way

while diary recording daily life seems to be a little embarrassed posted here.

What I want say is what things should I do for managing this barren blogger.

Free Writing

What does happiness represent?

A temporary feeling of satisfaction?

Well, I don’t feel happy very much recently.

It’s said that doing something makes you happy.

That’s true, once you have something really want to do.

While it won’t let you stay in a long states of feeling happy.

It owns its varied duration.

Maybe because of coming mid-term works, I can hardly do something make my mind joyful.

I am very annoyed and worried to everything about the mid-terms.

They are chasing me like monsters or demons and trying to swallow me inside them.

Sigh, what a hard-touch emotion, almost disappeared in my mind.

I really want to get rid of this unpleasant feeling.

I hope my happiness will come back once the mid-term is over.

So that I can do whatever I want to do and it may pay me variety of happy times eventually.